Rhyming helps sum up ideas. If you can say everything you want to say in ten sentences or less, why write a chapter? I think my problem is communication. I worry that my rhyme’s intent never gets through. Or at least it doesn’t resonate with enough authority. But I’m new to the game and I’ll continue to play. Maybe I’ll enroll in a community college creative writing course. I’ll annoy a portable classroom of eighteen year-olds with questions, enthusiasm and silly rhymes.
Now you're talking. (mom)
ReplyDeleteYou should write a children's book!
ReplyDeleteI had trouble writing in first person as well. I changed to the third person and everything became less hoity toity.
If you are traveling down Highway 1, make sure you stop in Tomales and say "hi."
Hoity toity...mind if I ever use that?
ReplyDeleteMaybe I could help you out on the farm some day. Roll up my sleeves and work in the sun. End the day with margaritas and tacos.
Yes, we could hang out with Jesus!
ReplyDeleteAh, I'd like that. It's comforting to know Jesus works on a farm. I'm a little suspicious of carpentry.
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